I just read an advertisement in job-hunting website about recruiting some positions of your company. I would like to apply for a position as a software engineer.
I understand it is essential to master a solid foundation for computer science. My professional skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I am a recent graduate of Peking University with a bachelor degree in Computer Science. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as an intern at a company where I have attained a fair knowledge and experience.
I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
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Dear Mr. Yu,
I just read an advertisement in(改为on) job-hunting website about recruiting some positions of(改为for) your company. I would like to apply for a position as a software engineer.
I understand it is essential to master a solid foundation for(改为of) computer science. My professional skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I am a recent graduate of the(删除) Peking University with a bachelor degree in Computer Science. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as an intern at a company where I have attained a fair knowledge and experience.
I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.
